Hi Bloggers,
This is my quick write hope you like it.
Sami and Joe were out for a walk when they saw a little dog in the canal “Wow check out that dog in the canal it looks like it needs saving,” remarced Joe.
“Do you think we should help him,” questioned Sami.
“Yes definitely,” replied Joe.
The boys ran over to the edge of the canal and peard down at the dog it looked to be on the edge of drowning. “I think one of us should hold on to the edge and the other one should hold on to the first person and then reach down and grab the dog,” wondered Sami.
The boys gave Sami’s idea a go but they just couldn’t reach it. They decided to hold on to a lunch box in between them so they could reach. “Just a bit lower and I can grab him,” shouted Sami.
“We are getting down to the last straw,” strained Joe.
“Got him, now quick pull him me up,” replied Sami.
Once the boys got back on their feet they celebrated as the puppy licked their faces.
Can you see any mistakes?
Blog you later
Stella.